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talfulano
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p.1 #1 · Demure


In natural light
Dec 16, 2016 at 03:55 PM
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p.1 #2 · Demure


Nice shot. She certainly is beautiful. But she looks more sad than shy.
Dec 16, 2016 at 06:41 PM
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p.1 #3 · Demure


Thank you no, no she wasn't sad and yes the beauty of youth.
Dec 16, 2016 at 07:58 PM
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p.1 #4 · Demure


talfulano - nice image, nice model. She looks demure to me.

Remember - interpretation says more about the viewer than the artist.

Kindness.

Ms Julian
Dec 16, 2016 at 10:11 PM
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p.1 #5 · Demure


Nicely done.

I found the fold of her dress going over her left arm a tad odd.
Dec 17, 2016 at 07:22 AM
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p.1 #6 · Demure


Agree with Jim, the dress bulge is a bit distracting. Great photo, still. How does this look in B-W toned?
Dec 17, 2016 at 07:35 AM

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p.1 #7 · Demure


Yes I saw that but it's just a loose top. I don't know about b & w. I really don't care for it.
Dec 17, 2016 at 09:15 AM
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p.1 #8 · Demure


Your image is quietly beautiful and lovely. Good job!

It might be improved a little by bringing down the highlights slightly on her forehead, just above her eyes, and on the upper part of her nose, and maybe her lips.

Cal
Dec 17, 2016 at 09:54 AM
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p.1 #9 · Demure


The blacks are crushed, the bulge in the dress, the tag is showing. Pretty model but just an okay image IMO.


Dec 17, 2016 at 11:29 AM
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p.1 #10 · Demure


glowhunter wrote:
The blacks are crushed, the bulge in the dress, the tag is showing. Pretty model but just an okay image IMO.

Picky, picky

OP, glowhunter is right - but - the bulge can be liquified/cloned, blacks can be lifted and the tag removed. What kind of image would you have then? I'm curious...
Dec 17, 2016 at 03:44 PM
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twoshadows wrote:
Picky, picky

OP, glowhunter is right - but - the bulge can be liquified/cloned, blacks can be lifted and the tag removed. What kind of image would you have then? I'm curious...


I know I'm being super picky but I love receiving harsh, nit picky critique. I've learned so much for other people tearing my work apart. A "good job!" or "awesome photo!" etc doesn't help anyone improve IMO.


Dec 17, 2016 at 05:22 PM
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p.1 #12 · Demure


Good suggestions. Ok is ok with me. I'm not a skilled post processing technician.
Dec 17, 2016 at 05:44 PM





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