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Jordan in the late afternoon sun

  
 
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p.1 #1 · Jordan in the late afternoon sun


Very light kiss of fill from a strobe shot through a 3' Octa, camera right

















Mar 14, 2026 at 06:17 AM
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p.1 #2 · Jordan in the late afternoon sun


Very nice, #1 is my favorite. I find the reflection in #2 on her face distracting

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Mar 14, 2026 at 08:46 AM
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p.1 #3 · Jordan in the late afternoon sun


Thank you for the feedback!


Mar 14, 2026 at 12:22 PM
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p.1 #4 · Jordan in the late afternoon sun


I can only comment as a viewer Jeff. I suck at "portrait photography".
Your use of side lighting is excellent in #1! Her facial line is displayed very well.(sharp jaw line) Nice sharp, well defined bone structure and her skin texture is "warming". Very nice depth in #1 also.
#2 is also very well done BUT I find the "light streak" distracting. That is just me and I am not denigrating the composition at all.

Nice emotion displayed in 1&2 also.

The last one appears to be using a soft focus to emphasize an ethereal look.

Nice work Jeff!
Dan



Mar 14, 2026 at 12:55 PM
 


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p.1 #5 · Jordan in the late afternoon sun


Thank you Dan! I was trying to get that light line to pass through her eye without much luck. The first two were shot close with a 50mm f/1.2 and the final shot was with a 70-200mm at f/2.8 to gain some better compression.

I appreciate the feedback!



Mar 14, 2026 at 01:02 PM
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p.1 #6 · Jordan in the late afternoon sun


nickelmedia wrote:
Thank you Dan! I was trying to get that light line to pass through her eye without much luck. The first two were shot close with a 50mm f/1.2 and the final shot was with a 70-200mm at f/2.8 to gain some better compression.

I appreciate the feedback!


Have you tried b&w on this image? It may surprise you!
Black and white portrait photography focuses on light, shadow, texture, and emotion to create timeless, intimate images, often by highlighting facial features and removing color distractions.There are very many techniques for b&w that color wont show......high contrast, dramatic lighting, sharp focus on the eyes.
Good luck!
Dan




Mar 15, 2026 at 10:23 AM
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p.1 #7 · Jordan in the late afternoon sun


#2 - I think the 'light streak' / 'reflection' / 'light line' makes the image.


Mar 15, 2026 at 09:30 PM







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