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Archive 2007 · #233: On Honeymoon
  
 
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p.1 #1 · #233: On Honeymoon


Here is my submission for new beginnings, simply called "on honeymoon".

Camera: Canon Powershot S3 IS
Aperture: F/4.5
Shutter: 1/500
ISO: 100
Lighting: Flashes with slave units bounced onto subject



This is my first competition entry, if I did anything wrong, please be so kind to let me know,

Thanks,
M_West

Edited by M_West on Jan 08, 2007 at 10:13 PM GMT

Edited by M_West on Jan 09, 2007 at 06:41 PM GMT
Jan 08, 2007 at 04:15 AM
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p.1 #2 · #233: On Honeymoon


Marius,

very nice composition. Two technical comments: First, I would
reduce the background noise. Second, I think the feet do not
look delicate enough for the shoes. For a shot like this,
everything has to be perfect (no offense meant). Maybe you
could soften the feet a bit or retouch here and there.

Best,
Marc.
Jan 08, 2007 at 07:24 AM
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p.1 #3 · #233: On Honeymoon


Hi Marc,

Thanks for the tips, find the changes in the top image, does this look better?

Thanks,
Marius.
Jan 08, 2007 at 03:16 PM
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p.1 #4 · #233: On Honeymoon


Marius,

I think that's much better! Amazing ...

Best,
Marc.
Jan 08, 2007 at 04:03 PM
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p.1 #5 · #233: On Honeymoon


Thanks alot Marc
Jan 08, 2007 at 04:09 PM

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p.1 #6 · #233: On Honeymoon


Very nice, sensual shot. I agree the PP version works better.
Congrats !
Jan 08, 2007 at 06:39 PM
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p.1 #7 · #233: On Honeymoon


Marius,

nice work in photoshop. Far nicer than what I could have done! If that's a paid shot, your client would love the results!

Bernard
Jan 08, 2007 at 06:48 PM
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p.1 #8 · #233: On Honeymoon


New one is 100% better...good job..nice feet btw


Jan 08, 2007 at 10:34 PM
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p.1 #9 · #233: On Honeymoon


Thanks!
Jan 09, 2007 at 12:52 AM





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