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Very nice shot. A few thoughts: (1) consider applying a tiny bit of perspective distortion and barrel distortion correction, (2) the truncated "ONE" is a tad distracting -- not entirely sure what to do about that. Overall, though, a beautiful shot: very interesting structure. Thanks for sharing.
kevinsullivan wrote:
Very nice shot. A few thoughts: (1) consider applying a tiny bit of perspective distortion and barrel distortion correction, (2) the truncated "ONE" is a tad distracting -- not entirely sure what to do about that. Overall, though, a beautiful shot: very interesting structure. Thanks for sharing.
Kevin
Kevin,
I appreciate your helpful comments. I actually did quite a bit of work on the distortion in CS4, but there is more to learn. And I agree about the ONE.
Scott
Jan 09, 2011 at 08:18 AM
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Well, Scott, I really like this. The issues that Kevin mentions didn't jump out until I read his post (and unfortunately now they do). One way to fix the the missing "O" might be to darken the levels in the area of that sign so that it starts to blend into the background a bit.
The composition works really well, with the strong diagonal coming in from the bottom left. Interesting lines all around. I could do without the frame, though.
Scott,
I have looked at this shot several different times just to see how I reacted to it each time and its wonderful with all the shapes and lines. My only nit is that I my eye always goes to the "financial center" in the bottom corner. Have you thought about cropping out the right side of the image where the sign is. It would make it square in format but might add a lot to the image.
